#31 - Creating Conflict by Using a Character's Wants and Needs (+ WORKSHEET)

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#031 - The Wants and Needs of a Song’s Character and How They Can Engage Your Listeners through Creating Conflict.
Did you know that listeners are drawn to specific topics of lyrics because they strive to get similar things in their lives as the character in the song?

When you think about your lyrics this way, it’s much easier to see the kind of target audience you want as a songwriter because your future listener will enjoy investing themselves in your song’s characters.

But how can you decide what your character strives for and what he wants or needs?
Where to start?
And how do their Wants and Needs influence each other to create a compelling narrative?

I’m glad you asked.

In today’s episode, I’m happy to share with you some storytelling tips on how you can write a compelling story for your song by creating some spicy conflict.

Episode Overview:

[00:01:24] What does your song’s character want?

[00:04:29] What does your song’s character need?

[00:11:02] Wants, Needs, and Conflict

[00:12:29] Conflicting Conscious and Unconscious Desires

[00:14:44] “Eye of the Tiger” by Survivor

[00:16:16] Tips for writing lyrics with Conflicting Conscious and Unconscious Desires

[00:19:51] Conflicting Conscious Desires and Unrecognized Needs

[00:21:27] “Welcome to the Black Parade” by My Chemical Romance

[00:26:23] Tips for writing lyrics with Conflicting Conscious Desires and Unrecognized Needs

[00:29:06] Everybody wants to be different, but nobody wants to change.
Links mentioned in this episode:

“Eye of the Tiger” by Survivor © Wb Music Corp., Sony/atv Melody, Easy Action Music
“Welcome to the Black Parade” by My Chemical Romance © BLOW THE DOORS OFF CHICAGO

Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.

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Lyric Mastery - Storytelling in Songwriting

#31 - Creating Conflict by Using a Character's Wants and Needs (+ WORKSHEET)

Lyric Mastery - Storytelling in Songwriting

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But how can you decide what your character strives for and what he wants or needs?
Where to start?
And how do their Wants and Needs influence each other to create a compelling narrative?

I’m glad you asked.

In today’s episode, I’m happy to share with you some storytelling tips on how you can write a compelling story for your song by creating some spicy conflict.

Episode Overview:

[00:01:24] What does your song’s character want?

[00:04:29] What does your song’s character need?

[00:11:02] Wants, Needs, and Conflict

[00:12:29] Conflicting Conscious and Unconscious Desires

[00:14:44] “Eye of the Tiger” by Survivor

[00:16:16] Tips for writing lyrics with Conflicting Conscious and Unconscious Desires

[00:19:51] Conflicting Conscious Desires and Unrecognized Needs

[00:21:27] “Welcome to the Black Parade” by My Chemical Romance

[00:26:23] Tips for writing lyrics with Conflicting Conscious Desires and Unrecognized Needs

[00:29:06] Everybody wants to be different, but nobody wants to change.
Links mentioned in this episode:

“Eye of the Tiger” by Survivor © Wb Music Corp., Sony/atv Melody, Easy Action Music
“Welcome to the Black Parade” by My Chemical Romance © BLOW THE DOORS OFF CHICAGO

Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.

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#66 How to Write A PRO- or ANTI WAR song 18:15

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✅ Tell Powerful Stories in Your Song Lyrics: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start --------------------------- Ready to write a song that hits hard and sticks with your listeners? In this video, we're diving into what it takes to create a pro- or anti-war song that really connects. We'll cover everything from the raw emotions war stirs up—sacrifice, hope, devastation—to the key message that makes your lyrics meaningful. I’ll share prompts for those powerful moments you can write about, like the intensity of battle or quiet moments of reflection. And we’ll go over the must-haves that will make your song abou this topic unforgettable. ⚡Grab the CHEATSHEET on writing songs about war: https://www.lyricmastery.com/war-songs-cheatsheet --------------------------- If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumann. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. ► Don’t forget to like 👍, comment 👇, and subscribe 👆 if you want more in-depth breakdowns like this one!…

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#65 How To Write A Chorus - Lyrics For An Empowering Song 16:23

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Michael Jackson knew the secret. A song can have incredible power over the audience. You’ve seen it—when the crowd sings along, especially during the chorus, something magical happens. ⚡Grab your CHECKLIST on Storytelling in Songwriting https://www.lyricmastery.com/storytelling-checklist ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start According to Jackson, it’s more than just words. When people sing a chorus over and over, they enter the alpha state—where the subconscious mind kicks in. They start to internalize the lyrics, and in a way, become what they’re saying. But here's the exciting part: you can create that kind of power in your own songwriting! In this video, I’ll show you five powerful ways to write a chorus that doesn’t just sound good but actually empowers people. We’re talking about choruses that can impact your audience on a deep level, maybe even change how they see themselves or the world. And here’s the kicker—these five methods increase in power, depending on the level of impact you want to create. So, stick around, because we’re going to break down all five and get you writing choruses that really resonate! If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumann. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Don’t forget to like, comment, and subscribe if you want more in-depth storytelling breakdowns like this one! 👇 Let me know in the comments: What’s your favorite empowering chorus?…

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#64 Unpacking the Magic of "Nothing is Over" by Sunrise Avenue: A Powerful Love Story in Song 26:29

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✅ Tell Powerful Stories in Your Song Lyrics: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start --------------------------- Let's look at the lyrics of Sunrise Avenue’s "Nothing is Over" and discuss why it’s such a powerful song. We’ll see how the first and last lines tell a story about a struggling relationship that still holds on with strong emotions and relatable words. We’ll break down the simple but powerful language and how it helps tell a deep love story full of hope and strength. ⚡Get the Lyric Blueprint: https://www.lyricmastery.com/lyricblueprint-014 --------------------------- If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumann. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Given this is a YT channel, and anyone can claim anything, here's the link to my Story Grid Editor Profile: https://storygrid.com/editors/melanie-naumann/ ► Don’t forget to like 👍, comment 👇, and subscribe 👆 if you want more in-depth breakdowns like this one!…

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#63 Taylor Swift's Storytelling and Songwriting Explored 26:06

33 weeks ago26:06

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Is storytelling truly the thing that sets Taylor Swift apart from every other music artist? In this video, I analyze Taylor Swift’s storytelling craft by examining her 11 studio albums and over 160 songs. Using 75 different storytelling criteria, I’ll break down where she excels, where she surprisingly needs to improve, and what her special sauce is that makes her who she is. As a Story Grid Certified Editor, I’ve dissected her entire discography to uncover the truth behind her storytelling techniques. If you’re a songwriter or just a fan of Taylor’s music, you’ll get a detailed breakdown of her best practices and learn how to apply them to your own craft. And if you’ve ever wondered how Taylor’s songwriting has evolved over the years, we’ll explore that, too. Stick around to find out: Is Taylor Swift as good of a storyteller as we all think she is? ⚡Grab the list of how TAYLOR SWIFT included the place in her song lyrics https://www.lyricmastery.com/taylorswift-where If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumann. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Don’t forget to like, comment, and subscribe if you want more in-depth storytelling breakdowns like this one! 👇 Let me know in the comments: What’s your favorite Taylor Swift song, and do you think she’s a great storyteller? ⚡Grab your CHECKLIST on Storytelling in Songwriting https://www.lyricmastery.com/storytelling-checklist ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start ► Subscribe to see a new video each week, and a breakdown of the 5 key story moments in a popular song each day.…

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#62 Lyric Breakdown of a Crime Story - The Night The Lights Went Out In Georgia 31:13

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In this video, we dive deep into Vicki Lawrence's classic hit, breaking down its gripping story of betrayal, murder, and shocking twists. ⚡Get the Lyric Blueprint: https://www.lyricmastery.com/lyricblueprint-011 We'll cover everything from how the song begins and introduces its characters, to the hidden layers within the lyrics. Why are names important? What’s the impact of the narrator's relationship to the main character? And how does the song masterfully mislead the listener with its chorus? With key story moments dissected—from foreshadowing to a jaw-dropping climax—you'll see why this track’s storytelling is still unmatched. We’ll also explore the song’s clever use of an unreliable narrator and how it delivers a surprising yet inevitable ending. 💡 What you'll learn: Using Red Herrings: Learn how to craft misleading clues in your story, like the song’s chorus, to keep your audience guessing until the very end—creating a more engaging, suspenseful experience. Telling a Gripping Story: Discover techniques for weaving character relationships and narrative tension into your storytelling—making your audience emotionally invested and eager for the resolution. Masterful Setup for a Payoff: Understand how to foreshadow and build towards an unexpected yet inevitable conclusion—leaving your audience satisfied with a clever, memorable twist. If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumanni. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you and I will read / reply to every comment. ⚡Grab your CHECKLIST on Storytelling in Songwriting https://www.lyricmastery.com/storytelling-checklist ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start Chapters: 00:00 Intro 00:48 Song's Beginning, 03:18 Naming Characters in a Song 04:21 Establishing Relationship between characters 05:36 Narrative Distance 06:36 Key Story Moment 1 - Inciting Interaction and Progressive Complication 08:30 Using the Chorus as a Red Herring to Mislead the Audience 09:48 Foreshadowing the ending 10:22 3rd Verse, Resolution Andy's story 12:33 Revealing the relationship between Main Character and the Narrator 13:32 Progressive Complication as an Affordance 15:19 Prepring for the story's climax 18:28 Key Story Moment 2 - The Turning Point 19:28 Key Story Moment 3 - The Crisis 20:58 Key Story Moment 4 - The Climax 21:27 Key Story Moment 5 - The Resolution 23:01 Should a heroic choice lead to a bad outcome? 25:31 How to deliver a surprising but inevitable payoff 28:27 Using an unreliable narrator 29:48 How great is that song…

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#61 - 3 Ways to Include the Location in the Lyrics 19:50

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Discover the 3 powerful ways to express the setting in your lyrics. Whether you want to hint at a place or make it central to your song’s story, I'll show you how to weave the setting into your song in a way that truly resonates. 💡 What you'll learn: - the only three ways to express the place in your song lyrics - lots of examples to see what option might be best for the song you're working on - why including the place can make your song so much stronger ⚡Grab the list of how TAYLOR SWIFT included the place in her song lyrics https://www.lyricmastery.com/taylorswift-where If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumann. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you and I will read / reply to every comment. ⚡Grab your CHECKLIST on Storytelling in Songwriting https://www.lyricmastery.com/storytelling-checklist ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start…

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#60 How To Write A Song Based On A Story (Key Story Moments) 16:20

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Discover the five key story moments that allow you to hit every mark when telling a story - whether it's in your novel, your screenplay, or your song. In this video, we explore the 5 key moments for a cautionary and a prescriptive tale. Spoiler: They are the same, but there's one significant difference. And I show you in the video what that is. 💡 What you'll learn: - the powerful progression of a story that works so that you can tell a story that will keep your audience engaged - the progression of a prescriptive and a cautionary story - where to begin your story, where to end it, and what to put in the middle so that you are never lost and know exactly what to focus on If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumanni. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you and I will read / reply to every comment. ⚡Grab your CHECKLIST on Storytelling in Songwriting https://www.lyricmastery.com/storytelling-checklist ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start ► Subscribe to see a new video each week, and a breakdown of the 5 key story moments in a popular song each day.…

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#59 - Quick Guide to Storytelling in Songwriting 10:52

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Do you want to write a song that tells a story, and you'd love to have a list of all the components that go into a working story? In this video, you will get a step-by-step list on how you can tell a story in a song. It's a five-step process that will allow you to outline your song, but also analyze the narrative structure of the songs you love. 💡 What you'll learn: - the V.E.R.S.E. framework to outline your song lyrics so you know what you can put in the chorus and in the verses - the five essential elements to include and the 5 key story moments to make for a strong narrative - what questions you need to ask yourself about your story's setting to make it feel real - how to bring it all together into a coherent outline If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumanni. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you and I will read / reply to every comment. ⚡Grab your CHECKLIST on Storytelling in Songwriting https://www.lyricmastery.com/storytelling-checklist ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start…

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#58 - The Only 3 Ways To Include The PLACE In Your Song Lyrics 28:10

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If I tell you there are only three ways to include the place in your song lyrics, which one will you choose? In this video, you will discover how to answer the question of "Where does it happen?" in your song lyrics and how the answer can contribute to your song! It's all about creating the setting so the characters in the song do not float in an empty space. 💡 What you'll learn: - the only three ways to include the place in your song lyrics - lots of examples to see what option might be best for the song you're working on - why including the place can make your song so much stronger If you’re new to my channel , my name is Melanie Naumanni. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you and I will read / reply to every comment. ⚡Grab your CHECKLIST on Storytelling in Songwriting https://www.lyricmastery.com/storytelling-checklist ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start…

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#57 - Why Is "I'm Just Ken" So Good? 9:24

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"I'm Just Ken" has won the Critics Choice Awards for Best Song. And Ryan Gosling couldn't believe it! In this video, you discover what made the song so good that it won. This is a masterclass in how to write song lyrics about a specific person while making it relatable, keeping the audience engaged, and delivering a meaningful takeaway. ► Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ► Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumanni. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Given this is a YT channel, and anyone can claim anything, here's the link to my Story Grid Editor Profile: https://storygrid.com/editors/melanie-naumann/ Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you and I will read / reply to every comment. This video contains copyrighted material under the fair use doctrine for purposes such as criticism, commentary, and educational use. Chapters: 00:00 Introduction 00:48 Part 1: Relatability 01:44 Powerful Problem 02:12 Funnel 03:15 The Pendulum 03:43 Part 2: The Interest Problem 05:01 The Story 07:06 Part 3: The Mantra…

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#56 - Best Song Topics To Write About (That People Love To Listen To) 28:28

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If I tell you, there are only six global topics of what your song can be about, would you like to see them? So no more wondering about what to write about, but getting a clear direction right from the start. 💡 What you'll learn: - the six global categories that promise universal appeal - see lots of song examples to get inspired - how to discover what topic/theme resonates the most with you If you’re new to my channel , my name is Melanie Naumanni. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you and I will read / reply to every comment. ⚡Grab your CHEATSHEET on Writing a Song's First Line using the Powerful Problem https://www.lyricmastery.com/first-line-powerful-problem ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start ► Subscribe to listen to a new episode each week.…

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#55 - How To Write The Beginning Of A Song So You Can Hook Your Audience (+Examples) 17:16

39 weeks ago17:16

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No idea how you can start your song's first line? Discover how you can write a captivating start that will instantly hook your audience! 💡 What you'll learn: - the best way to create an emotional connection - how to write your song's first line as an intriguing hook - see lots of examples and techniques of this one powerful opening line device If you’re new to my channel , my name is Melanie Naumanni. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you and I will read / reply to every comment. ⚡Grab your CHEATSHEET on Writing a Song's First Line using the Powerful Problem https://www.lyricmastery.com/first-line-powerful-problem ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start ► Subscribe to listen to a new episode each week.…

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#54 - Your Song Has To Go Somewhere - Meaning Explained 26:56

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Have you ever been told the popular songwriting advice of "Your Song Has To Go Somewhere?", but you didn't know how to pull it off? Discover what it means and how you can apply it in this episode. 💡 What you'll learn: - Know where to start and where to end - Creating coherence in your lyrics - the two most important questions to ask yourself before you start writing - The two kinds of story (+song examples) If you’re new to my channel , my name is Melanie Naumanni. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you and I will read / reply to every comment. ⚡Grab your CHECKLIST on Storytelling in Songwriting https://www.lyricmastery.com/storytelling-checklist ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start ► Subscribe to listen to a new episode each week.…

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#53 - How To Write A Song That Tells A Story 54:40

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Unlock the secrets to storytelling in songwriting by knowing the exact moments that go into every story. In this episode on "How To Tell A Story In Song Lyrics," I show you how you can write song lyrics that tell a story that works so that you can hook, engage, and impact your audience. I will explain the concept of Narrative Songwriting in a step-by-step strategy to help you tell a captivating story in your lyrics, which can transform your songwriting. 💡 What you'll learn: - The Two Kinds of Story - The Key Moments of a Working Story - How to Write A Song That Tells A Story - Lots of Popular Song Examples to See the Concept applied - WATCH IT on YouTUBE: https://youtu.be/97BXHDZ_dzE If you’re new to my channel, my name is Melanie Naumanni. I’m the creator of LyricMastery.com. It’s the place where you can master the craft of storytelling in songwriting and discover how to craft your lyric's content. I've been a story editor since 2015, and a Story Grid Certified Editor since 2019. Leave your thoughts and questions in the comments below – I love hearing from you. ⚡Grab your CHECKLIST on how to tell a story in a song: https://www.lyricmastery.com/story-moments-checklist ►Want to WRITE songs that tell a story? Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com ►Online Course on Storytelling in Songwriting. Go here: https://www.lyricmastery.com/start…

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#52 - Lewis Capaldi - The Needless Struggle of a Successful Music Artist 19:12

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So, I recently watched Netflix's documentary about Lewis Capaldi, "Lewis Capaldi: How I'm Feeling Now," and let me tell you, it was a rollercoaster of emotions—inspiring and tear-jerking in equal measure. >>> Download a Songwriter's Roadmap to Narrative Songwriting <<< >>> lyricmastery.com/21steps In this episode, we talk about Lewis Capaldi’s struggle and the pressure of writing an encore to his debut album, "Divinely Uninspired To A Hellish Extent." And how he could have overcome that terrible inner voice saying, “I’m shite at writing lyrics,” or the imposter syndrome that came with it. So if you’re curious to find out how writing lyrics can become easier without all the overwhelm, keep listening. [00:01:20] Lewis Capaldi - The Rise and Fall of a music artist [00:05:02] Lewis Capaldi - Origin Story [00:07:48] The Importance of Storytelling in Songwriting: [00:11:14] The ART of writing lyrics [00:12:16] What is Narrative Songwriting? Show Notes lyricmastery.com/21steps Lewis Capaldi on Netflix: “Lewis Capaldi - How I’m Feeling Now” Visit ⁠lyricmastery.com⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#51 - How to Write a Viral Song 40:47

2 years ago40:47

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How many of you have a message for the world, but you need help finding your voice or your audience? Close your eyes. Take a deep breath. I want you to imagine millions of people listening to your song. I want you to imagine thousands of people knocking your door down wanting to know when you come to their city to play them the song live because that song is so valuable to them. You can open your eyes. And I will tell you this. This doesn't have to be limited to your imagination. This is what happens when you go viral. And I'm going to tell you exactly how you can achieve it. So pay close attention to this episode of the Lyric Mastery Podcast because it will help you find your voice and show you how to make your song go viral. Episode Overview: What does it mean to go viral? Writing A Viral Song For whom are you writing this song? Storytelling in Songwriting Make it Exciting Distribution: How to get your song out there. Have a Tastemaker No Social Media Tastemaker? Don't worry. Links mentioned in this episode: FOREVER FREE PLAN: Email Newsletter and Marketing Platform: Systeme.io Write Attention-grabbing Opening Lines: A Song's First Line Flowers lyrics © Concord Music Publishing LLC, Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC, Warner Chappell Music, Inc I Will Survive lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group bad guy lyrics © Kobalt Music Publishing Ltd., Universal Music Publishing Group Visit ⁠lyricmastery.com⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#50 - “The Comeback” by Drew Davies - A great example of a redemption story in a song 56:11

2 years ago56:11

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Lets move away from all those love songs we’ve talked about in the past because I recently had the pleasure to listen to the song “The Comeback ” by the London-based musician Drew Davies . As stated on metaltalk.net, this song by Davies “is a call to arms for society's malcontents and a tip of the hat to an era of alternative greats such as David Bowie, Sisters of Mercy and Nine Inch Nails.” And in this episode, we're gonna talk about the power of the lyrics of the song "The Comeback". Specifically, you will discover how you can tell an amazing redemption story in your lyrics. Drew has really written a masterpiece. So let's go through his lyrics and find out how he did it! Episode Overview: [00:01:19] The S.O.N.G. Framework [00:03:38] “The Comeback” by Drew Davies [00:07:02] Step 1: Summary [00:21:12] Step 2: Observer [00:28:34] Step 3: Narration [00:47:13] Step 4: Gist [00:53:44] Great Songs Take Time to Write. Show Notes: Listen to “The Comeback” by Drew Davies on Soundcloud on Youtube on Spotify Find out more about Drew Davies here: https://www.drewdaviesmusic.com/ Go to lyricmastery.com…

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#49 - Overcoming what's holding you back & reaching your goals. 11:35

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When you feel stuck in your songwriting or in life in general, I’d like to share the approach that helped me. So, if you feel stuck sometimes… maybe this helps. Visit lyricmastery.com for everything on storytelling in songwriting.

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#48 - The Ultimate Dilemma for the Song’s Main Character – Waypoint #3: The Crisis 19:03

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In today’s episode, we’re gonna explore what it looks when we write about facing a crisis. We’ve all been in a dilemma in our life, right? It’s when no matter what we choose, there’s always something to lose, but also something to gain. But it’s normal if we fear the loss more than having the potential to gain something. Being in a dilemma, there’s just so much uncertainty attached it. And we might fear making a choice at all. So when we write lyrics about a dilemma, we can actually provide guidance to our audience … whenever they face a similar crisis. And in this episode, you will find out how you can write lyrics about a person’s dilemma. What it takes to truly create a hard choice for your song’s main character and I’ll also show you all the options of where you can place that crossroad moment in your lyrics’ narrative. And as a lyric example, we’ll look at Gloria Gaynor’s song: “I Will Survive” because there’s so much to take away from the way those lyrics were written. Sound good? Awesome, then let’s get started! What's the episode about? [00:01:45] Overview: Waypoints Inciting Incident, Turning Point, Crisis [00:04:29] Crisis [00:06:41] Real Choice [00:07:42] Meaningful Stakes [00:08:59] Best Bad Choice [00:10:08] Irreconcilable goods Show Notes: Online Course on Narrative Songwriting: lyricmastery.com/start “Lose Yourself” by Eminem If I Let You Go lyrics © Kobalt Music Publishing Ltd., Universal Music Publishing Group Warning lyrics © Warner Chappell Music, Inc I’m a Believer lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC, Universal Music Publishing Group Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#47 - How to combine every part of the lyrics so that it contributes to one central meaning? 11:20

3 years ago11:20

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Today, I wanna answer a question that I got recently asked in my Facebook Group. It’s from Hudson. And he asked: How can I combine every part of the song so that it contributes to one central meaning of the lyrics? That’s an awesome question, and let’s talk about it right now. Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#46 - Writing A Turning Point Moment in Lyrics – Waypoint #2: The Turning Point Progressive Complication 15:46

3 years ago15:46

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If you’re like me, you have something valuable to share. Something that matters. And that we know that can help someone who will listen to our song. And to get our message across in a way that bypasses a listener's critical mind, we have to wrap what we have to say into an experience. And we create that experience through the journey we send our song’s main character on. So that’s why we talk about the waypoints of that journey. So that we can create that experience that leads someone from their mess to a better place. And today, we will talk about the second waypoint on that journey. Today, we’ll make it even worse for our song’s main character. Because that’s life, right? It has to get worse first before it can get better. So let’s get right to it. [00:01:13] Overview [00:05:56] Progressive Complications [00:10:03] Creating Progressive Complications [00:11:32] Turning Point [00:12:41] Turning Point Categories Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#45 - How I Discovered the Power of Lyrics 18:32

3 years ago18:32

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Today, I wanna take the chance and introduce myself to you. Especially, I wanna tell you the story about the time in my life when I was completely lost, on my own, literally at the end of the world, and how one song gave me the strength to carry on… and what all of that taught me about what makes lyrics powerful. So it’s all about my journey, so to say, and why I’m so passionate about the power of lyrics. Because this is the most incredible thing ever. So here’s how everything started. Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#44 - Throwing the Song's Character's Life Out Of Balance – Waypoint #1: The Inciting Incident 14:21

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You know, I always consider what happens in a powerful lyric like a journey. It’s basically about watching a character move from one point in their life to another. They are in a certain external or internal situation, and they wanna get from where they are to a better place. So there’s always this little journey that the song’s main character goes on. But before anyone moves in life and takes action, most of the time, though, something must happen beforehand. And that’s what today’s episode is all about. It’s about that incident that makes them see that they gotta pursue what they want so that they can get rid of an imbalance. It’s like they feel that something is off, and they’re pulled towards something better — externally or internally. So, if you want to find out how to write lyrics with a meaningful message, then this episode is the first part of five to doing just that. Here's what we'll cover: [00:01:37] 5 Commandments [00:03:54] Definition of the Inciting Incident [00:08:31] Creating Drive in the Audience [00:09:29] Causal and Coincidental Inciting Incidents [00:11:03] Placement of the Inciting Incident Show Notes #37 - Attention Grabbing Opening Lines - Part 1: The Powerful Problem Hot Legs lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC That's Amore lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC I Will Survive lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group The Foundations of Decay lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC Stan lyrics © Kobalt Music Publishing Ltd., Peermusic Publishing, Warner Chappell Music, Inc I'll Be There For You lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC, Universal Music Publishing Group Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#43 - What You Have to Say Matters… and How To Make it Matter to Others 17:25

3 years ago17:25

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In today’s episode, I want to talk with you about you, your purpose, and why we write lyrics. For me, when it comes to writing – no matter if it’s novels or lyrics – I use my words as the means to communicate with my audience and deliver a meaningful message that has the power to make an impact on them. And I guess, since you are here, you have the same desire. You want to be heard because you have something to say about life. And what you have to say matters. But communicating what we have to say in a way that matters to others isn’t easy. We can’t be preaching to the choir. We can’t take the role of a parent and say: Don’t do this because it leads to … We all know that no one listens if you preach it to them. On the other hand, if we are direct and say it bluntly, people might hear our words, but they will not care or take them seriously. We could also just write an academic paper and explain why our message is important … But who’s ever going to read that bulky volume? That’s why in today’s episode, we talk about a storytelling principle that helps you deliver your message in a way that affects lives, changes minds, touches hearts, and makes an impact. Because what it all comes down to is that we, as songwriters, lyricists, and storytellers, have an amazing power to influence people’s lives and make a positive, even life-changing, contribution. But that only works if we rely on one of the most basic and most important storytelling principles. What that is, well, you're about to find out. Podcast Overview: [00:02:25] Treat A Song Like An Experience [00:05:29] Why Stories Matter [00:11:12] The Five Commandments of Storytelling [00:15:16] Wrap up - 5 Commandments Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#42 - “Are You Gonna Kiss Me Or Not” by Thompson Square – How to Create a Smooth and Subtle Narrative Flow 48:24

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In today’s episode, we’ll go through the lyrics of “Are You Gonna Kiss Me Or Not” by Thompson Square. And I tell you, as I first listened to the song. I thought: Quite nice. But I didn’t give the lyrics much thought . But now, after I have studied the lyrics and their storytelling power, I must say, I’m super surprised by how well-crafted those lyrics are. It’s like when you say: Yes, Game of Thrones by G.R.R. Martin is a nice fantasy series. When it truth, it’s an epic masterwork. And somehow, I feel like the lyrics to this song don’t get appreciated enough. They are so well-crafted that it is a delight to take them apart and just see how well they’ve been strung together. So if you aim to write a love song that smoothly flows through a narrative and gives your audience a fully-satisfied listening experience, I invite you to study the lyrics of “Are You Gonna Kiss Me Or Not” by Thompson Square with me. Episode Overview: [00:01:45] The S.O.N.G. Framework [00:03:07] “Are You Gonna Kiss Me Or Not” by Thompson Square [00:05:22] Step 1: Summary - What is the song about? [00:15:13] Step 2: Observer - Who is the main character of the song? [00:23:51] Step 3: Narration - Analyzing the storytelling craft. [00:30:25] Analyzing the scene told in the song. [00:35:20] The Change [00:37:41] Writing Techniques [00:40:15] Step 4: Gist - What is the message of the song? [00:43:16] What we've learned from “You Shouldn't Kiss Me Like This” [00:45:43] Song Exercise - The First Kiss Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#41 - Attention Grabbing Opening Lines – Part 3: The Intriguing Question 13:54

3 years ago13:54

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#043 - Welcome to part 3 of our mini-series of Attention-Grabbing Opening Lines. In episode 41 of the Stories in Songs Podcast, I’m gonna throw a lot of questions at you. Why? Listen to the show and find out. ;-) Episode Overview [00:00:53] The Intriguing Question [00:03:37] Different Types of Questions to ask [00:07:13] Song Examples that start with a question [00:09:49] The Intriguing Question – Wrapup Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#40 - Steps Two and Three to Creating A One-Sentence Lyric Outline To Guide Your Writing Process 34:26

3 years ago34:26

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#040 - Creating A One-Sentence Lyric Outline To Guide Your Writing Process. In today’s episode, we continue with steps Two and Three to Creating A One-Sentence Lyric Outline To Guide Your Writing Process. If you haven’t listened to episode 38 yet where we talked about the character’s literal action, please go back to that episode and listen to it. It’s vital if you want to move forward with me in this episode. I’ll include a short recap, but listen to the full episode if you haven’t yet. Episode Overview: [00:01:15] Your Lyric Writing Compass Point [00:03:40] Literal Action - Recap [00:08:57] A Character’s Essential Tactic [00:13:26] The Purpose of Essential Tactics [00:17:52] Change and Valences [00:22:07] Direct Address, Conflict, and the Question of Who Wins? [00:27:10] The Lyric’s Guiding Message [00:31:41] Lyric Writing With Intention Show Notes Another Day In Paradise lyrics © Concord Music Publishing LLC Welcome To The Jungle lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group I Will Survive lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#39 - Attention Grabbing Opening Lines – Part 2: The Shocking Statement 13:04

3 years ago13:04

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#39 - Today, we continue with another technique of how you can create an attention-grabbing opening line for your lyrics beginning. And specifically, we talk about the Shocking Statement and different ways how you can pull it off to stun your audience and make them wanna hear more! Episode Overview: [00:01:08] The Shocking Statement [00:03:35] Different Ways to Create a Shocking Statement: [00:07:02] More examples of songs that start with a Shocking Statement [00:11:16] The Shocking Statement - Wrapup Show Notes Dead! lyrics © Blow The Doors Off The Jersey Shore Music Inc Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting. Would you like to join our FREE 3-hour Masterclass on ... The #1 Secret of Writing Timeless Hit Song Lyrics, and How You Can Do It, too. Go to lyricmastery.com/getstarted…

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#38 - The First Step to Creating A One-Sentence Lyric Outline To Guide Your Writing Process 26:33

3 years ago26:33

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#038 - Let's address the question of why we should look at the craft of storytelling when we write our lyrics – apart from the impact the power of storytelling has on our audience. Let's focus on our writing process. Because when we write our lyrics, it’s good to know where we are going. Otherwise, we’re just writing words that are all over the place. And that’s going to feel messy to our listeners. So to write a good line or lyric section, we have to ensure that every part of the lyric does what it’s supposed to: Engage and connect. And once we get a clear idea of what we are trying to accomplish, everything unlocks. So if you look for a compass point that helps you write your lyrics with clarity and intention, this episode is for you. Episode Overview: [00:02:21] Your Lyric Writing Compass Point [00:05:59] Your character’s literal action [00:12:20] The Size of The Cast in Your Lyric [00:16:58] Setting and Context [00:18:58] The Purpose of Literal Action [00:23:32] Recap: Literal Action Show Notes Another Day In Paradise lyrics © Concord Music Publishing LLC Welcome To The Jungle lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group You Shouldn't Kiss Me Like This lyrics © Tokeco Tunes I Will Survive lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#37 - Attention Grabbing Opening Lines - Part 1: The Powerful Problem 26:10

3 years ago26:10

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#037 - How can we write an attention-grabbing opening line so that we can hook our listener with our first line? In today’s age, thousands of distractions compete for our audience’s attention. And if our song doesn’t hook our listeners straight away, they might not listen to it at all. But we want to get heard, right? Songs are a powerful way to make an impact on someone – in as little as three minutes. But in order to get our message across or what we have to say about life, we have to get people’s attention right from the first line on. Otherwise, … it’s like a movie. If we miss the beginning, it’s so hard to catch up on and we probably give up anyway. So let’s talk about ways to make sure our listeners actually want to listen to our lyrics … and how we can achieve that with our opening line. Episode Overview [00:01:42] The Purpose of a Strong Opening Line in Songs [00:06:00] The Opening Line of the Powerful Problem [00:10:24] How to pull off the attention-grabbing opening line of the Powerful Problem. [00:14:41] Song Examples that have lyrics that start with a problem: [00:23:45] The Powerful Problem - Wrapup Show Notes I'll Be There for You lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#36 - Knowing Which Lyric Lines & Ideas To Keep Or Throw Out – How To Answer The Question Of Relevancy 31:18

3 years ago31:18

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#036 - How To Answer The Question Of Relevancy when it comes to Writing Lyrics. Have you ever listened to a song only to end up confused because something in the lyrics seemed off? Did you struggle because something was missing or didn’t understand why something was included because it didn’t seem relevant? In today’s episode, I want to talk with you about how you can figure out what’s relevant to include in your lyrics and what you can leave out. I’ll let you in on the secret and show you the tools that support you in making the decision to keep and eliminate lines, sections, or the overall idea. After all, the goal is to write a lyric where the entire lyric, its different parts, and the way they work together are all in sync. So if you are intrigued to discover the tools to determine which lines belong in your narrative which building blocks to use and find the right words to effectively communicate all the details and events of your lyric to your audience. … then this episode is for you. Episode Overview [00:01:58] Coherence is a Lyric’s Main Goal [00:03:29] A character in a song needs to face a problem. [00:04:51] 1. The What If? Scenario [00:06:53] Fish out of the Water-Scenario [00:10:44] Strange Thing or Stranger Comes to Town - Scenario [00:16:03] 2. Narrative Device [00:23:10] 3. Point of View [00:28:39] Summary: Relevance Show Notes I’m a Believer lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC, Universal Music Publishing Group Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#35 - Can A Song Save A Life? 17:50

3 years ago17:50

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#035 - “Can A Song Save A Life.” Lyrics ain’t an afterthought to making a song. They are equally as important as the melody and the song’s production. I mean, writing Songs as well as Listening to Songs can be the greatest aid in a desperate situation. It can keep us from falling down a cliff and empower us again. Like Galadriel said to Frodo: “May it be a light to you in dark places when all other lights go out.” That’s the power of songs. Let’s talk about how a song can even save a life. Episode Overview [00:01:19] The Power of Songs [00:03:17] My All Is Lost Moment - New Zealand Part 2 [00:11:53] The Next Right Thing Show Notes Die Toten Hosen “Steh auf, wenn du am Boden liegst” (German Version) – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J86zYZGApkc Die Toten Hosen “Stand Up” (English Version) – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJUvrw7O_6I Stand Up lyrics © BMG Rights Management, Melodie Der Welt GmbH The Next Right Thing lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group Watch “The Next Right Thing” on Youtube: https://youtu.be/kFkClV2gM-s Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#34 - How To Crush It As A Support Act - The Do’s and Dont’s! 30:05

3 years ago30:05

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#034 - How to Crush it as a Support Act to Get People Interested in Your Stuff. After all, it’s all a question: Will they sing your lyrics back to you, or will they not? For me as a listener, yes, I’ll definitely shout back: Viva La Victoria! Now what that means and how you can get people excited as a support act – even if they didn’t come because of you – you’ll discover that in this episode. We talk about how you can hook, captivate, and keep the crowd's attention and awaken their interest in you and what you have to say. I’ll share with you some of the DO’s and DON’Ts of how you can crush it as a support act. And I’ll even tell you a secret way that will ensure that people start singing along to your songs even if they have never heard your songs before. Episode Overview [00:02:40] The Opportunity of Being Hired as a Support Act [00:07:38] Getting a Chain Reaction in the Audience & Making Them Feel Something [00:11:01] The DONT’s of being a Support Act [00:12:29] Eclipse - The band that truly got the crowd excited. [00:15:40] When you are booked as a Support Act, DO this: [00:22:40] The secret way of how you can get the crowd to sing along to your songs even if they have never heard them before. [00:28:00] Summary of Do’s and Dont’s Show Notes Check out Eclipse from Sweden - https://www.eclipsemerch.com/ Listen to “Viva La Victoria” - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M-EvFAx0OsE Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#33 - Dynamic Characters in Narrative Songwriting 29:56

3 years ago29:56

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#033 - What does “character development” or “developing characters” mean? And do we, as songwriters, really have to think about how we create our song’s character? And if so, how can we show the audience a character in the lyrics that they can invest themselves in? That is so believable that they themselves have the power to carry the message of the song? If you ever thought that the task of character development is for writers of novels or screenplays only, this episode will surprise you. So let’s dive in and find out more about the importance of your song’s character. Episode Overview: [00:01:19] The importance of the song’s character [00:06:45] Developing characters vs. evolving characters. [00:10:15] Three reasons why fleshing out your characters is so darn important. [00:11:36] What makes a well-developed character? [00:12:13] How does character development affect the story? [00:13:37] Different kinds of characters in songwriting [00:15:40] Dynamic Characters in Songwriting [00:24:38] How to create a dynamic character for your next song? [00:28:44] "Dynamic Characters" – Assignment Show Notes I’d Do Anything for Love (But I Won’t Do That) lyrics © Edward B Marks Music Company, Marks Edward B. Music Corp., Edward B. Marks Music Co. Nothing Else Matters lyrics © Creeping Death Music Ain't No Other Man lyrics © Universal Music - Careers, Downtown Music Publishing Llc, Bug Music, Xtina Music, Gifted Pearl Music Inc., Bobby Marin Music Publishing, Reach Music Publishing Inc., Concord Copyrights I'd Come for You lyrics © Universal Music Publishing Group, Warner Chappell Music, Inc Love Yourself lyrics © Universal Music Corp., Bieber Time Publishing, Hipgnosis Songs Fund Limited Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#32 - “You Shouldn't Kiss Me Like This” by Toby Keith – Making Your Song’s Character Fall in Love 41:29

3 years ago41:29

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#032 - Making Your Song’s Character Fall in Love and Influence your Audience's Engagement. In today’s episode, we’ll go through the lyrics of the song “You Shouldn't Kiss Me Like This” by Toby Keith. The lyrics are so amazing to see how much the power of storytelling influences your audience’s engagement. The song is written so great, and the lyrics show you how you can make your song’s character fall in love. And you’ll learn exactly how you can pull that off too by using Pat Pattison’s Development Engine of the three boxes as an outline and fill it with life by looking at this song’s narrative techniques. Furthermore, they offer you lots of great insights you can take away from them – especially when it comes to using the power of storytelling to keep listeners engaged from the first phrase to the last. Episode Overview: [00:01:29] The S.O.N.G. Framework [00:02:19] “You Shouldn't Kiss Me Like This” by Toby Keith [00:04:20] Step 1: Summary - What is the song about? [00:12:08] Step 2: Observer - Who is the main character of the song? [00:18:55] Step 3: Narration - Analyzing the storytelling craft. [00:21:53] Analyzing the scene told in the song. [00:27:30] The Change [00:29:35] Writing Techniques [00:32:32] Step 4: Gist - What is the message of the song? [00:34:57] What we've learned from “You Shouldn't Kiss Me Like This” [00:38:19] Song Exercise - The First Kiss You Shouldn't Kiss Me Like This lyrics © Tokeco Tunes Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#31 - Creating Conflict by Using a Character's Wants and Needs (+ WORKSHEET) 31:47

3 years ago31:47

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#031 - The Wants and Needs of a Song’s Character and How They Can Engage Your Listeners through Creating Conflict. Did you know that listeners are drawn to specific topics of lyrics because they strive to get similar things in their lives as the character in the song? When you think about your lyrics this way, it’s much easier to see the kind of target audience you want as a songwriter because your future listener will enjoy investing themselves in your song’s characters. But how can you decide what your character strives for and what he wants or needs? Where to start? And how do their Wants and Needs influence each other to create a compelling narrative? I’m glad you asked. In today’s episode, I’m happy to share with you some storytelling tips on how you can write a compelling story for your song by creating some spicy conflict. Episode Overview: [00:01:24] What does your song’s character want? [00:04:29] What does your song’s character need? [00:11:02] Wants, Needs, and Conflict [00:12:29] Conflicting Conscious and Unconscious Desires [00:14:44] “Eye of the Tiger” by Survivor [00:16:16] Tips for writing lyrics with Conflicting Conscious and Unconscious Desires [00:19:51] Conflicting Conscious Desires and Unrecognized Needs [00:21:27] “Welcome to the Black Parade” by My Chemical Romance [00:26:23] Tips for writing lyrics with Conflicting Conscious Desires and Unrecognized Needs [00:29:06] Everybody wants to be different, but nobody wants to change. Links mentioned in this episode: “Eye of the Tiger” by Survivor © Wb Music Corp., Sony/atv Melody, Easy Action Music “Welcome to the Black Parade” by My Chemical Romance © BLOW THE DOORS OFF CHICAGO Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#30 - 3 Ways to Develop your Song's Character Using Internal Content Genres 26:22

3 years ago26:22

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#30 - Write a song that shows a meaningful transformation of your song’s main character. Here's how you can do that. Do you want to tell your audience about someone who had to change a part of who they are to get what they actually needed? Does it interest you not only to write lyrics about external challenges but also to discover how those external challenges affect and change a person internally? Are you fascinated by character arcs because you wanna see how a person has started out at one point in their life and what circumstances led to becoming a different person? In today’s bite-sized episode, we’ll talk about three different areas that are at your disposal to show a meaningful change in how your song’s character thinks, acts, or is perceived by others and themselves. We’ll do that by looking at internal content genres. What that means? Well, you’re about to find out. Episode Overview: [00:01:01] Stories are about change. But what kind? [00:05:04] Internal Content Gerne - Definition [00:07:44] The three Internal Genres [00:08:53] Internal Genre: Status [00:15:19] Internal Genre: Worldview [00:19:29] Internal Genre: Morality [00:24:28] Summary: Internal Content Genres Links mentioned in this episode: “Stuck With Me” by Green Day – Stuck With Me lyrics © Warner Chappell Music, Inc, Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC Live Like You Were Dying lyrics © Warner Chappell Music, Inc, Round Hill Music Big Loud Songs, BMG Rights Management Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#29 - Every Character WANTS something. But how to figure out WHAT that is? 20:44

3 years ago20:44

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#029 - Let's create a character for your song who does what's necessary to get what they want. And besides, we also figure out WHAT a character might want. In a story, the main character actively pursues a goal, right? I don’t think you’ve ever gone to the movies to watch someone sitting on the couch all day and doing nothing. We watch a story to follow a certain character in their journey of how they’re trying to achieve something, more precisely, a certain goal. And when it comes to writing lyrics, your song’s character also needs to WANT something. But how do you figure out what your character might be after? What is it they want? If you have trouble finding an answer to that question, this podcast episode will give you some great insights on where you can look to easily find out some great possibilities of your character’s want. And the good thing is: we are talking about possibilities that have been proven in how they hook and engage the audience since there were stories. So it can’t get any better than that. So let’s find out how we can easily figure out what our song’s character might want. So that we don’t create a character that’s sitting on the couch, never leaves his house, and does nothing. But someone who will do what’s necessary to get what they want. Episode Overview: [00:01:57] Recap: Universal Human Values [00:04:16] External Content Genre [00:06:22] Hierarchy of Needs [00:08:13] What does your character WANT? [00:10:22] Physiological Needs – Action Stories [00:11:22] Safety Needs – Crime, War, Thriller, Horror, Western [00:13:30] Love and Belonging - Love Story [00:14:08] Esteem – Performance and Society Stories [00:15:36] Now, why is it so important to know what your character wants? [00:17:10] Don’t forget: Why do they want it? Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#28 - “Shut Up and Kiss Me” by Mary Chapin Carpenter – Avoiding Contradictions in Lyrics 49:52

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#028 - Today we’ll do our third lyric study about the love story moment of the first kiss. More specifically, we’ll talk a little more about the tension, and the anticipation BEFORE the first kiss happens. After all, that’s an incredible feeling to be moments away from that first kiss while the butterflies are rushing in roller coasters through your tummy. But we also point out what can completely ruin that special moment . And you should be aware of avoiding that mistake in your own lyric writing. Wanna find out more about this? Episode Overview: [00:02:06] What you’ll learn in this episode [00:03:31] “Shut Up and Kiss Me” by Mary Chapin Carpenter [00:05:44] Step 1: Summary - What is the song about? [00:11:39] Step 2: Observer - Who is the main character of the song? [00:22:43] Step 3: Narration - Analyzing the storytelling craft. [00:27:14] Analyzing the scene told in the song. [00:29:54] The Change [00:32:04] Writing Techniques [00:38:10] Step 4: Gist - What is the message of the song? [00:38:20] What we've learned from "Shut Up and Kiss Me" [00:42:45] Song Exercise - The First Kiss Links mentioned in this episode: Shut Up and Kiss Me lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC, Universal Music Publishing Group Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#27 - Develop your Lyric's Verses by Using Progressive Complications (+ WORKSHEET) 22:03

3 years ago22:03

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#027 - Do you want to make it progressively worse for your song's character? Then find out how you can use progressive complications to develop your lyric verses. Do you struggle with writing the second verse? Do you have problems developing your song’s idea and creating an outline? You might have already looked at some ways how to come up with ideas to overcome being stuck in writing the second verse. Maybe you have tried to use Pat Pattison’s concept of the three boxes, but you still feel a little stuck. In today’s episode, we talk about the song “Hero of War” by Rise Against to find out how using progressive complications can actually help you develop your idea, take it through the boxes, and write about something that will really make an impact. Episode Overview: [00:01:19] Recap: The Three Boxes & The Five Commandments of Storytelling [00:01:51] Development Engine – 3 Boxes [00:03:09] Five Commandments of Storytelling [00:03:48] Do we need to state every commandment in lyrics? [00:05:16] “Hero of War” by Rise Against [00:07:51] The Five Commandments for “Hero of War” [00:10:12] Progressive Complications in “Hero of War” [00:17:22] Progressive Complications – Summary [00:18:59] Progressive Complications and the 3 Boxes Hero of War lyrics © Sony/atv Tunes Llc, Do It To Win Music Progressive Complications - Article on the Story Grid Website Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#26 - Development Engine ADVANCED: 5 Commandments of Storytelling 25:18

3 years ago25:18

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#026 - Use Pat Pattison's Development Engine and the 5 Commandments of Storytelling and develop your lyric idea. Today we talk about how you can actually develop your lyric idea into an outline. That means no more struggles with what to put in the first verse or the dreaded second verse! You might already be familiar with Pat Pattison’s approach. He’s calling it “Your Development Engine” by using boxes that are different in size. Even if you haven’t heard of his approach yet, and you’ll wonder what I mean by boxes in various sizes, I’ll give you a quick introduction to that concept in a couple of minutes. And then, after learning about Pat’s approach, we’ll then expand that established concept with another storytelling concept to help you better flesh out the idea you have for your lyrics. So if you struggle with not knowing how to put your idea into an outline, this episode is for you. P.S. Check the show notes and download your free work- and cheatsheet! Episode Overview: [00:01:32] Why Storytelling Matters in Songwriting [00:03:34] Introduction to Pattison’s Boxes [00:04:03] Productive Repetition [00:05:36] Development Engine – BOXES [00:07:51] Verse Development [00:11:22] The Story Grid’s 5 Commandments of Storytelling [00:13:41] 5 Commandments in a chronologically told story in a song [00:14:42] Commandment #1: Inciting Incident [00:16:26] Commandment #2: The Turning Point Progressive Complication [00:19:05] Commandment #3: Crisis [00:20:32] Commandment #4: Climax [00:20:56] Commandment #5: Resolution [00:21:12] Verse Development by using the five commandments of storytelling [00:22:49] “I’m A Believer” and the five commandments Links mentioned in this episode: Coursera Songwriting Course with Pat Pattison Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#25 - A Songwriter’s Six Best Friends ADVANCED: The Story Grid Diorama Model (+WORKSHEET) 17:58

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#025 - Outline your lyric's idea by using six crucial questions and combine them with the Story Grid Diorama Model. Today we talk about a songwriter’s six best friends. You might have already heard about the term: Songwriter’s Six Best Friends in the book “Writing Better Lyrics” by Pat Pattison or in one of his courses. But today, we want to make his concept more practical. We want to use a specific model that will help us visualize our six best friends. At the end of today’s episode, you’ll be much clearer in how you can put your six best friends to use without wondering how it might all fit together. You’ll get the glue delivered in this episode. So let’s go. P.S. Check the show notes for your free work- and cheatsheet! Episode Overview: [00:01:35] A Songwriter’s Six Best Friends [00:02:34] Lyric Writing: Who [00:05:15] Lyric Writing: What [00:06:26] Lyric Writing: When [00:08:00] Lyric Writing: Where [00:09:21] Lyric Writing: Why & How [00:10:30] Story Grid Diorama Model [00:14:55] Diorama Model & Six best Friends [00:17:32] Preview Links mentioned in this episode: Story Grid Trinity Seminar Pat Pattison: Writing Better Lyrics Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#24 - “Rumor” by Lee Brice – Using Multiple Love Story Conventions 53:22

3 years ago53:22

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#024 - Do you want to write a great love song about the first kiss? Get inspired by using love story conventions to get your listeners into the mood. Today we’ll do our second lyric study about the love story moment of the first kiss. And we’ll use the song “Rumor” by Lee Brice as today’s example to find out how you can pull it off to write about that special and exciting moment when two persons who are attracted to each other are about to share their first kiss. And by studying the lyrics of this song, you’ll discover ... how you can use multiple love story conventions in a song without getting over the top and when it’s better to leave your story unresolved and end with a cliffhanger not to steal the spotlight from your song’s central idea. Sound good? So let’s get started. Episode Overview: [00:01:21] The S.O.N.G. Framework [00:02:25] “Rumor” by Lee Brice [00:04:43] 1. Summary (About) [00:17:27] 2. Observer [00:22:55] 3. Narration [00:28:02] Analyzing the scene told in the song. [00:36:16] Change [00:38:18] Writing Techniques [00:47:59] What we’ve learned from Rumor by Lee Brice [00:50:30] Song Exercise - The First Kiss Links mentioned in this episode: Rumor lyrics © Warner Chappell Music, Inc, Kobalt Music Publishing Ltd. Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#23 - Finding Topics to Write about by Looking at Universal Human Values 23:52

3 years ago23:52

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#023 - Not in the mood to write another song about love? Get inspired by other great topics to write about. Let me ask you this: Have you ever wondered if there’s anything other than writing a love song? It seems every second song seems to be about love. So there’s a huge demand for love stories. But still, can’t we write about something else for once? But what else is there? How can we define some other options of things to write about? Where do we start? How can we come up with interesting ideas that really interest people? Are there some overall possibilities we could use, like some overall categories that can inspire us to know what to write about? Today’s bite-sized episode will give you the answer, and I’ll include song examples that help you see each of those different topic versions applied. Episode Overview: [00:01:28] Recap of Crucial Components of Storytelling [00:03:00] Universal Human Values in Stories [00:06:08] Love Spectrum [00:07:18] Life and Death Spectrum [00:11:13] Story Example: Gladiator [00:13:56] Crucial Components in a Love Story [00:16:47] Lyric topic ideas by looking at different Story Content Genres [00:18:03] Action [00:18:35] Crime [00:19:20] Horror [00:19:51] War [00:20:24] Thriller [00:20:57] Western [00:21:07] Society [00:21:30] Performance [00:21:56] Summary of what we’ve learned about external content genres and universal human values Visit ⁠⁠lyricmastery.com⁠⁠ for everything on storytelling in songwriting.…

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#22 - How to Show a Change between your Song's Beginning and Ending 19:54

3 years ago19:54