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16: "I" Copy vs. "You" Copy

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In this episode Kimberly and Bobbie tackle the dreaded "I / me / us" copy vs "You / your / you're" copy.

Show Notes:

  • How to win Friends and Influence People - Dale Carnegie
  • The starting point to determine if your copy is heavy on the "I" copy.
  • The you-to-I balance for your marketing.
  • The "Yes-train" method to help your customer's get on board with your products and services.
  • Understanding the popular I-to-you ratio of good copywriting.
  • How to talk about "the problem state" and transition into "the solution state" with 'I' copy and 'you' copy.
  • The 5% rule to keep your reader engaged in your copy.
  • Bond Halbert - The Gary Halbert Letter
  • Halbertizing.com
  • Joanna Wiebe - Copyhackers.com
  • Kimberly's Website
  • Bobbie's Website

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Content provided by Bobbie Maloy. All podcast content including episodes, graphics, and podcast descriptions are uploaded and provided directly by Bobbie Maloy or their podcast platform partner. If you believe someone is using your copyrighted work without your permission, you can follow the process outlined here https://ppacc.player.fm/legal.

In this episode Kimberly and Bobbie tackle the dreaded "I / me / us" copy vs "You / your / you're" copy.

Show Notes:

  • How to win Friends and Influence People - Dale Carnegie
  • The starting point to determine if your copy is heavy on the "I" copy.
  • The you-to-I balance for your marketing.
  • The "Yes-train" method to help your customer's get on board with your products and services.
  • Understanding the popular I-to-you ratio of good copywriting.
  • How to talk about "the problem state" and transition into "the solution state" with 'I' copy and 'you' copy.
  • The 5% rule to keep your reader engaged in your copy.
  • Bond Halbert - The Gary Halbert Letter
  • Halbertizing.com
  • Joanna Wiebe - Copyhackers.com
  • Kimberly's Website
  • Bobbie's Website

Thanks for listening!

  continue reading

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